dragonjet's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[[SF] space battle]

should have been better

the game is nice and well done
but make it a little more organized
your intro is good but in the "game part",
it gets a little bit messy

maybe smaller ships so we can have more space to move
and smaller enemies...
slower bullets so we can see the animation

im looking forward to some updates... :)

SubmitFlash responds:

lol ok.

[Escape The Bedroom Part 1]

good start my friend

listen here people!
it's his first time to make a flash game,
took him only 8 hours to finish it,
he's using a free flash designer softeware,
he is a filipino, and take note:
hes only 13 years old
and he completed a non-noobish game!

oh hell his graphics are way better than my games'
pretty good game for a first flash. nice start.
better than other first timers out there.

dont get discouraged by the dark forces out there
its also one thing i like from you,
you're still determined even if others give you zeros
everybody went through this ya know...

oh and you CAN have flash 9, ill pm you...

Disco-PiggyHammy responds:

Thanks dude! dragonjet wow thats great! thanks for the review and youll PM me flash 9? wow! thanks again for the review and gave me humor 5 too for the Sadako thing right? or is it the others? still thanks! and also may the force be with you , me and all the people!

[First Flash Tut]

only for the noobs

i know you really like to help other people in using their mac flash.
next time, i expect to see another tutorial for intermediate users.
you can do it... i know... youre more than a regular flash maker.
i can feel your aura.

youll do good if you use your skills for yourself sometimes.
you can even win 250$. make your own flash...

Storm responds:

First of all, are you trying to say that you hate this because its a tutorial?
Secondly, I'm making a new tutorial that will be a bit harder. If you want really hard stuff check out the AS: Main, while you wait for it. :P
Thirdly, why should I be blamed for helping someone out OTHER than YOU? I can help out who I want, whether it be noob or expert.
Fourthly, are you giving me an evil review because I gave your one a bad one? Is this supposed to be revenge?

If you have an answer to these questions, PM me them please.

[Tall Ship Terror]

great interactivity

you also got wind eh...
but i find it sometimes hard to release the rock.
when i drag it too much low coz i need more power,
it wont release.
coz i think, its set on onRelease function, but even if i released the mouse button and the cursor is outside the flash, it wont be recognized by the script.
does anyone get me? oh im really bad at engilsh...

Snowmania responds:

thankyou for you response dragonjet.

i understand the problem that you are having, but unfortunately it is a limitation fo the flash player, not being able to recognise ht emouse outside the player.
if it gets "stuck", just click on the slingshot again to fire it..

thankyou for reveiwing

[Creativity Square 2]

fun fun fun

fun but i dont really get it...
can other people see the words i assemble?
or they can only see the things i type in the chatroom?

chineseleper responds:

yes, everyone sees everyone elses actions :)

[Squares: Revamped]

not bad at all

nice game... 3/5
next time, dont use aquares
maybe use other graphics...
a monster maybe is following you...
first its a baby monster, then level 2 its a snake... then its a gorilla, next level its a dragon... ya know... use other things than squares...

and you're a human or a knight trying to catch a gold or something...

itll be better...

IvoryGuy responds:

That's a good idea for another version. I may make a sequel to this remake of the sequel to the original, with added modes and whatnot. Thank you.

[Swords & Dragons]

even if its a demo, still needs work

work on the graphics... add more colors...
and its better if you use hotkeys,
must not need to press enter after typing in the command...

Jess-PKC responds:

It is designed to look like an IBM CGA game, 4 colours and no more.

[Cartman Dress Up]

not bad

you can even change his eyes...
nice one...

blueyedguy responds:

Thanks